Comments on: The Steppe at Night http://blog.writenothing.com/2008/01/09/the-steppe-at-night/ Writing and I have a love/hate relationship. And by that I mean hate/hate/love. But I'm gonna do it anyways... so you might as well come along for the ride Fri, 02 Jul 2010 02:37:11 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Yuletide http://blog.writenothing.com/2008/01/09/the-steppe-at-night/comment-page-1/#comment-20 Yuletide Fri, 11 Jan 2008 03:49:22 +0000 http://writing.yulebomb.net/2008/01/09/the-steppe-at-night/#comment-20 <p>Funny you mention it... not quite picnic, but still kinda neat (and low-tech! well, sorta) http://writing.yulebomb.net/2008/01/10/mongolian-night-hypertext/ :-)</p> Funny you mention it… not quite picnic, but still kinda neat (and low-tech! well, sorta) http://writing.yulebomb.net/2008/01/10/mongolian-night-hypertext/ :-)

]]> By: Barbara http://blog.writenothing.com/2008/01/09/the-steppe-at-night/comment-page-1/#comment-19 Barbara Fri, 11 Jan 2008 01:34:41 +0000 http://writing.yulebomb.net/2008/01/09/the-steppe-at-night/#comment-19 <p>Alex, I wonder how this piece would be affected if you tried it out in picnik. I feel as though I want the image while I read the text. Or at least I wonder if using words right on the image could intensify the feeling of insignificance of lone human in that night. I love the contrast of you with mundane toothbrush against the chaotic vastness of the universe. Does the final clause work hard enough?</p> <p>bg</p> Alex, I wonder how this piece would be affected if you tried it out in picnik. I feel as though I want the image while I read the text. Or at least I wonder if using words right on the image could intensify the feeling of insignificance of lone human in that night. I love the contrast of you with mundane toothbrush against the chaotic vastness of the universe. Does the final clause work hard enough?

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