Comments on: The Arrival of Winter http://blog.writenothing.com/2008/01/06/the-arrival-of-winter/ Writing and I have a love/hate relationship. And by that I mean hate/hate/love. But I'm gonna do it anyways... so you might as well come along for the ride Fri, 02 Jul 2010 02:37:11 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: Yuletide http://blog.writenothing.com/2008/01/06/the-arrival-of-winter/comment-page-1/#comment-18 Yuletide Thu, 10 Jan 2008 21:38:30 +0000 http://jtermwriting.yulebomb.net/?p=16#comment-18 <p>-The way you look as an outsider. -"She won't be going anywhere soon" is awkward -Different opening</p> <p>-Reiterate the coldness -Suddenly I am not the only one at the beginning</p> <p>-18 below C, snot freezes -23 below C, fingers hurt after 1 minute of exposure</p> -The way you look as an outsider. -”She won’t be going anywhere soon” is awkward -Different opening

-Reiterate the coldness -Suddenly I am not the only one at the beginning

-18 below C, snot freezes -23 below C, fingers hurt after 1 minute of exposure

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